fedorafan: (Oh Magic Eightball)
James "Noir" Mendetta ([personal profile] fedorafan) wrote2009-09-14 08:18 am

[Accidenal Audio]

And as the detective watched the twin taillights of her car getting smaller in the distance a light rain began to pour down around him. The light of the lampost she'd left him other bathed him in a golden hue like an angel's grace. That's what she'd been to him...a fallen angel looking for repentance...too bad in the end she'd had to make a deal with the devil to get it.

But that's how life plays out in the big city, love and loss, stories are a dime a dozen to those tunes especially for a poor slub private eye working out of Crime Alley.

*The sound of a book closing*

That's one's one of my favorites...I mean sure the gumshoe doesn't get the girl...they hardly ever do but that was pretty action packed eh Tiff?

*Silence as Tiffany is still in her coma...and then the sound of Noir shifting in his seat.*

Tiff? Tiffany can you hear me?

What's wrong Noir?

What's going on?

...tears...she's crying.

...but she's not awake.

...*sigh* No...*Pause* Maybe I should have picked a story with a more upbeat ending...

[OOC: Italics are Pico, bold is Yaamon]

[identity profile] fedorafan.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Um...I'm no doctor but that doesn't seem normal to me...is it?

[identity profile] scrapperzen.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
Generally, no. Which is why I'm on my way.

And don't flail, Noir. There's a lot of expensive equipment in there.

[identity profile] fedorafan.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
G-gotcha no flailing!

I swear I didn't think the story was that sad!!!